Luca Storm
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MatureOngoing40m
Last published Sat, Feb 3, 2018
I am trying to write a book, that I started in my english class. But, I do not know if anyone would like to read it, so I am thinking about posting the prologue, and then if someone wants to read the "book" itself, just let me have some feedback? Thank you!
Also, I am not trying to copy anyone, just so you know! I want this to be an original piece by me.
SPOILER: I will be trying to spice the story up a bit, thus the Mature rating :)
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