untrust: the beginning of hell
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Annalyse Milton grew up loving video games. She was an expert at what she loved, and the eyebags showed it. When she was accepted to Peter's School For Gifted Children, she was excited to meet kids her age who excelled at their own unique talents, being called "The Best" at whatever they were.
What she didn't expect, however, was to be thrown into a murderous, almost battle royale with 16 of her fellow classmates.
Run by an insane person, hidden behind a psychotic bunny animatronic robot, the kids are given rules and guidelines they must follow, and they're fairly simple. There are only four rules;
- You can't leave
- When one is murder, a trial will be held, and if the killer is found they are executed. If they are not or if they choose the wrong person, everyone but the killer is executed. If the killer commits suicide, the trial will still continue until they are proven guilty but no execution will be held.
- You aren't to bring harm to your headmaster, or you will receive punishments. The headmaster can't also bring you harm or take part in the crimes.
Whether it be hell or heaven, who will survive? Will Annalyse survive? Who is behind all this? Is someone in the class the reason for this? Why them?
With the minds of geniuses and idiots, will they be able to survive and figure out why they are here?
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