Under The Surface
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Last published Sun, May 6, 2012
Zoe is just like any other normal girl in her senior class. She has her own group of friend, has plans for the future, and is super excited for the school lock-in. But Zoe has a tragic past and she won't let anyone know about it. Dispite everthing that has happened she has coped extremly well so no one supects a thing. During the school lock-in she plans to do some serious pranking, especialy to one of her best friends ex-boyfriend who cheated on her. When she meets his bestfriend chace its love at first sight for the both of them. But chace notices all the secrets she hids and feel hurt that she won't open up to him. Will Zoe ever open up to him ?
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