Do not seek for nuts (short story)

(I can rewrite it in French if some of you are interested/Je peux réécrire cette nouvelle en français si ça vous intéresse également)
There is not much to say about it except that I hope I'll get as much feedbacks as I can. I'm trying to improve my English writing (I'm French) because this semester I have to write a short story. Do not hesitate to criticize as long as it is useful for my improvement.
This is my first short story, and it's really short (lol) but I hope you'll enjoy it.
If the last sentence reminds you of something, this is normal. We had to write what could happen before that sentence.