Unacceptable

(Rewriting)

Unacceptable follows the two main characters, Malina Cortes and Jessie Busch, threw anger, heart brake, confusion, sadness, hatred, pain, suffering, loss, and most importantly, love.
Malina Cortes, also know as, Lina, is a seventeen year old young woman who's family is rich and strict. Malina has always gotten everything she has ever wanted and is completely happy with the way she lives her life or at least that's what everyone thinks. Carlos is Malina's best friend and plays a big role in her life for they know every little thing about each other including each others deepest darkest secrets.
Jessie Busch, well known as Jess or J, is a twenty-three year old woman. Jessie is a ladies lady. Let's put it this way, she serves and satisfies. Jessie's life is also complicated but her best friend Carmen makes it a lot easier to just be herself because she doesn't ever have to worry about losing Carmen and Carmen never has to worry about losing Jess.
What happens when one night Malina and Carlos happen to run into Jessie and Carmen?
If you wanna find out, you read and I'll write.