Saving Perias

Saving Perias

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Planet Perias was lost. Their heart was gone. Empty cold stares watched five year old Trystan's every move. He had lost his once loving family. His home when once had been warm and cosy was now filled with weird, plain things with moving images. He was lost. He needed help. He needed love. *** 12 years gone by in a flash. My name is Trystan. Trystan Mograteyue. I'm 17 this year. I have a sister, a perfect one at that. They had thought us not to love or feel. I couldn't do that. I've had been failing all my Urseu tests - A test to see if you could not love, not feel. I hated feeling inferior but did they expect me to stand there and watch an innocent animal being tortured to close deaths? Did they expect me to not feel any emotions when they show me images of my parents dead? And the answer was yes. My sister was cold, smart and emotionless. Laughing was considered weird here. Crying was considered crazy. Anger was considered illegal. It hasn't always been like that. Why has it changed? This question had been haunting me for years. But one thing I knew. I have to save Perias. *** Trystan had enough of this emptiness and coldness he was feeling. He wanted to run away. But to where? He had remembered walking off the cliff. Then Everything went black. Kadira's life looks great. Loving parents, great friends, popularity. It was all hers. But she had never felt lonelier. She never expressed her feelings to anyone. Her secret hideout was where she vented all her frustrations at. No one would ever know what was going on in her. Not even herself. Then a gorgeous boy had appeared in her hideout. He was hurt and bloody. His eyes were tightly shut as a tattoo caught her eyes, a tattoo that read-Perias.
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