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I wanna be in the blue sky
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Ongoing, First published Oct 17, 2017
This short story uses the sky as a metaphor for greed, I think. This is just a rough draft but I don't know where to go with the story. The girl get what's she wants in the end but then ends up wanting more than what she has. I'm just looking for some friendly critiques or ideas.
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