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Ma plictisesc si desi am incercat in trecut sa fac un gen de carte ( pe care din greseala am sters-o) revin cu un altfel de critica la carti random citite.
Nu am o grila sau standard de a alege, si da, eu imi aleg cartile ce le citesc, fara comenzi ca nu sunt Starbucks, dar pe ce carte marca WTPD imi arunc ochii, las si o opinie in chiar aceasta carte.
Afla ce cred eu ca merita sa citim pe WTPD si ce nu din perspectiva unui... a mea.
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