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𝟖𝐓𝐇 𝐃𝐎𝐆 || JJK x Makima!reader
"𝘖𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘸𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 "𝘠𝘦𝘴" 𝘰𝘳 "𝘞𝘰𝘰𝘧", 𝘐 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘢 𝘥𝘰𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘴𝘢𝘺𝘴 "𝘕𝘰"." 𝙅𝙪𝙟𝙪𝙩𝙨𝙪 𝙆𝙖𝙞𝙨𝙚𝙣 𝙭 𝙈𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙢𝙖 ! 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙧 ➥ In which a 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 named y/n works as one of the 1st-year teachers, alongside the famous 𝐆𝐨𝐣𝐨 𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐮. 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘂𝘀 : completed/not edited 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱 : 04/28/2024 𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝: 11/06/2024 ─── ⋆⋅ ♰ ⋅⋆ ─── NOTE: Please be aware that this book may contain some triggering and uncomfortable themes.Tamamlanmış Hikaye
𝐈𝐌𝐌𝐄𝐑𝐒𝐈𝐎𝐍 || 𝙵𝚁𝙴𝙴! 𝙸𝚆𝙰𝚃𝙾𝙱𝙸 𝚂𝚆𝙸𝙼 𝙲𝙻𝚄𝙱
ᯐ 𝐈𝐌𝐌𝐄𝐑𝐒𝐈𝐎𝐍 (𝙵𝚁𝙴𝙴! 𝙸𝚆𝙰𝚃𝙾𝙱𝙸 𝚂𝚆𝙸𝙼 𝙲𝙻𝚄𝙱) (𝚂𝙴𝙰𝚂𝙾𝙽 𝟷: 𝙲𝙾𝙼𝙿𝙻𝙴𝚃𝙴) ─────────────────── ❝ 𝐃𝐈𝐃 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐉𝐔𝐒𝐓 𝐃𝐈𝐕𝐄 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐃 𝐅𝐈𝐑𝐒𝐓 𝐈𝐍𝐓𝐎 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐈𝐑𝐒 𝐎𝐅 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐏𝐎𝐎𝐋? ❞ ❝ 𝐍𝐎..𝐍𝐎𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐔𝐓 𝐔𝐏 𝐀𝐍𝐃 𝐓𝐎𝐒𝐒 𝐌𝐄 𝐎𝐍𝐄 𝐎𝐅 𝐓𝐇𝐎𝐒𝐄 𝐏𝐎𝐏𝐒𝐈𝐂𝐋𝐄𝐒 𝐈 𝐍𝐄𝐄𝐃 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐖𝐄𝐋𝐋𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐈𝐍 𝐌𝐘 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐃 𝐓𝐎 𝐆𝐎 𝐃𝐎𝐖𝐍! ❞ 𝗜𝗻 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗰𝗵- Free spirited (Y/N) (L/N) finds herself thrown into the deep end of joining a swimming club with a group of boys with girlish names and otherwise terrible swimming skills. Despite not knowing what may come, (Y/N) might as well help these hyperactive boys get a chance at going further than ever with their swimming dreams, all while battling her own feelings when her past comes back to bite her. ➶-͙˚ ༘✶ ( 𝙵𝚁𝙴𝙴! 𝙸𝚆𝙰𝚃𝙾𝙱𝙸 𝚂𝚆𝙸𝙼 𝙲𝙻𝚄𝙱 𝚇 𝐅𝐄𝐌! 𝚁𝙴𝙰𝙳𝙴𝚁 ( @𝚔𝚒𝚍𝚞𝚍𝚘𝚛𝚊 ) ───────────────────
YOU | 𝙄.𝙔𝙪𝙟𝙞 ✓
your determination was one of the first things about you that stuck out to me, in the nonsense you spouted about giving people a chance at a "proper death" blah blah. You're not afraid to stand up for what you believe in, what you think is right. You have a kind and innocent soul, yet for some reason you got wrapped up in this mess. That's why, Yuji Itadori, i have to protect 𝙮𝙤𝙪. 𝒏𝒐 𝒎𝒂𝒕𝒕𝒆𝒓 𝒘𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒊𝒕 𝒎𝒆𝒂𝒏𝒔 𝒊 𝒉𝒂 𝒗𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒅𝒐. .・。.・゜✭・.・✫・゜・。. .・。.・゜✭・.・ Jujutsu kaisen Yuji Itadori x FEM!reader #1 in #jujutsukaisenxreader |15/8/24 #12 in #sfw |22/1/25 #2 in #yuji | 28/6/25 #4 in #yujiitadori | 13/6/25Tamamlanmış Hikaye
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𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐨𝐥𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐝, 𝐛𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐭𝐨𝐨, 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐲 𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐡𝐨𝐰, 𝒃𝒖𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒚 𝒅𝒊𝒅𝒏'𝒕 𝒄𝒂𝒓𝒆, 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒚 𝒉𝒂𝒅 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒄𝒉𝒂𝒐𝒔, 𝒇𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅 𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉 𝒐𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓. × ᴛʜᴇ ᴘʀᴏᴍɪsᴇᴅ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀʟᴀɴᴅ/ʏᴀᴋᴜsᴏᴋᴜ ɴᴏ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀʟᴀɴᴅ ғᴀɴғɪᴄᴛɪᴏɴ ; [ + ] ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ ᵈᵃᵗᵉ ˢᵗᵃʳᵗᵉᵈ: dec. 27, 2019 ᵈᵃᵗᵉ ᵉⁿᵈᵉᵈ: jan. 5, 2022Tamamlanmış Hikaye
i pack a chainsaw -HIATUS
↳bnha x denji!reader ❝all i gotta do is rev up and i'm ready to turn anything in my way to sawdust!❞ kicking villain ass is awesome, but I'm really in this hero gig for the chance at a normal life- and boobs, dick too. . bi/pansexual implied reader, masculine! afab! reader . slight romance with various characters, though the story is focused on character development a/n: i fucking love reading and responding to your comments, so make more neoww!!
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Seme male reader x Uke males
I decided to do this after being inspired by many talented writers I follow on wattpad. Title explains everything, and request rules will be the first chapter.Tamamlanmış Hikaye
"𝘖𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘸𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 "𝘠𝘦𝘴" 𝘰𝘳 "𝘞𝘰𝘰𝘧", 𝘐 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘢 𝘥𝘰𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘴𝘢𝘺𝘴 "𝘕𝘰"." 𝙅𝙪𝙟𝙪𝙩𝙨𝙪 𝙆𝙖𝙞𝙨𝙚𝙣 𝙭 𝙈𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙢𝙖 ! 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙧 ➥ In which a 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 named y/n works as one of the 1st-year teachers, alongside the famous 𝐆𝐨𝐣𝐨 𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐮. 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘂𝘀 : completed/not edited 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱 : 04/28/2024 𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝: 11/06/2024 ─── ⋆⋅ ♰ ⋅⋆ ─── NOTE: Please be aware that this book may contain some triggering and uncomfortable themes.
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