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↳bnha x denji!reader ❝all i gotta do is rev up and i'm ready to turn anything in my way to sawdust!❞ kicking villain ass is awesome, but I'm really in this hero gig for the chance at a normal life- and boobs, dick too. . bi/pansexual implied reader, masculine! afab! reader . slight romance with various characters, though the story is focused on character development a/n: i fucking love reading and responding to your comments, so make more neoww!!
The Rules.
Life doesn't have a rule book. But it has unsaid rules, some even tips. In no particular order, here are the rules that I feel have deep meanings (sometimes...) behind them. Especially for me. FULL DISCLOSURE: It is now 2021 and I'm 21 years old. I wrote this at 14 with no real perspective on life. Read at your own risk. It's bad. I love to look back at myself and laugh which is why is is still up. All the love.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
Why I Hate (Most) OC Review Books
Over thirty reasons why I wouldn't choose someone to review my characters.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
Mackenzie's Critique Shop
[PERMANENTLY CLOSED] Want a genuine reader and helpful critiques? In this shop, I offer you helpful advice and outlook on your book, all while commenting and voting! I try my best to read everything in your story, and provide as helpful outlooks on it as I can. Check inside for more details. ... [] OPEN [] CLOSED FOR CATCH UP [] HIATUS [!] PERMANENTLY CLOSEDAbgeschlossene Geschichte![[ on editing hiatus ] 𝐖𝐎𝐔𝐋𝐃 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐆𝐈𝐕𝐄 𝐌𝐄 𝐀 𝐅𝐋𝐎𝐖𝐄𝐑? | ᶜˢᵐ](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/362103376-256-k654628.jpg)
[ on editing hiatus ] 𝐖𝐎𝐔𝐋𝐃 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐆𝐈𝐕𝐄 𝐌𝐄 𝐀 𝐅𝐋𝐎𝐖𝐄𝐑? | ᶜˢᵐ
━ 002. ❝For someone so focused on finding some strange sort of fairy tale love, you spend a lot of time worrying about other people's problems... And for what? ❞ [CURRENTLY ON SEVERE EDITING HIATUS!!!] In which, a tired but relentlessly perfectionistic girl gets entangled in the affairs of Aki and his squad of weirdos. Now here she is with the strange group and surprisingly she can't wait to kick ass and eat grass. She's not sure how her life went this direction or how one day she contracted an infection from an alien organism. Hey, at least she's amused by it, even though she's pretty sure she got the disease from Makima. On the bright side of all of this chaos, maybe she'll find love. And she can do a whole lot when she buys her own nine millimeter. "So... Are you a boobs or ass type of guy?" "Well... I'd have to go with boobs all the way!" "Really? I haven't heard that from anyone but my brother, you would have definitely gotten along with him." "This is an inappropriate conversation to have at work!"
𝐈𝐌𝐌𝐄𝐑𝐒𝐈𝐎𝐍 || 𝙵𝚁𝙴𝙴! 𝙸𝚆𝙰𝚃𝙾𝙱𝙸 𝚂𝚆𝙸𝙼 𝙲𝙻𝚄𝙱
ᯐ 𝐈𝐌𝐌𝐄𝐑𝐒𝐈𝐎𝐍 (𝙵𝚁𝙴𝙴! 𝙸𝚆𝙰𝚃𝙾𝙱𝙸 𝚂𝚆𝙸𝙼 𝙲𝙻𝚄𝙱) (𝚂𝙴𝙰𝚂𝙾𝙽 𝟷: 𝙲𝙾𝙼𝙿𝙻𝙴𝚃𝙴) ─────────────────── ❝ 𝐃𝐈𝐃 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐉𝐔𝐒𝐓 𝐃𝐈𝐕𝐄 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐃 𝐅𝐈𝐑𝐒𝐓 𝐈𝐍𝐓𝐎 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐈𝐑𝐒 𝐎𝐅 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐏𝐎𝐎𝐋? ❞ ❝ 𝐍𝐎..𝐍𝐎𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐔𝐓 𝐔𝐏 𝐀𝐍𝐃 𝐓𝐎𝐒𝐒 𝐌𝐄 𝐎𝐍𝐄 𝐎𝐅 𝐓𝐇𝐎𝐒𝐄 𝐏𝐎𝐏𝐒𝐈𝐂𝐋𝐄𝐒 𝐈 𝐍𝐄𝐄𝐃 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐖𝐄𝐋𝐋𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐈𝐍 𝐌𝐘 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐃 𝐓𝐎 𝐆𝐎 𝐃𝐎𝐖𝐍! ❞ 𝗜𝗻 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗰𝗵- Free spirited (Y/N) (L/N) finds herself thrown into the deep end of joining a swimming club with a group of boys with girlish names and otherwise terrible swimming skills. Despite not knowing what may come, (Y/N) might as well help these hyperactive boys get a chance at going further than ever with their swimming dreams, all while battling her own feelings when her past comes back to bite her. ➶-͙˚ ༘✶ ( 𝙵𝚁𝙴𝙴! 𝙸𝚆𝙰𝚃𝙾𝙱𝙸 𝚂𝚆𝙸𝙼 𝙲𝙻𝚄𝙱 𝚇 𝐅𝐄𝐌! 𝚁𝙴𝙰𝙳𝙴𝚁 ( @𝚔𝚒𝚍𝚞𝚍𝚘𝚛𝚊 ) ───────────────────
𝟖𝐓𝐇 𝐃𝐎𝐆 || JJK x Makima!reader
"𝘖𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘸𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 "𝘠𝘦𝘴" 𝘰𝘳 "𝘞𝘰𝘰𝘧", 𝘐 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘢 𝘥𝘰𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘴𝘢𝘺𝘴 "𝘕𝘰"." 𝙅𝙪𝙟𝙪𝙩𝙨𝙪 𝙆𝙖𝙞𝙨𝙚𝙣 𝙭 𝙈𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙢𝙖 ! 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙧 ➥ In which a 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 named y/n works as one of the 1st-year teachers, alongside the famous 𝐆𝐨𝐣𝐨 𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐮. 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘂𝘀 : completed/not edited 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱 : 04/28/2024 𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝: 11/06/2024 ─── ⋆⋅ ♰ ⋅⋆ ─── NOTE: Please be aware that this book may contain some triggering and uncomfortable themes.Abgeschlossene Geschichte!["My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/268673945-256-k202187.jpg)
"My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED]
Hello! This is my first book so there will probably be some Errors but i'll try my best to fix it. Also English is not my native language so pardon my bad grammar😅😅😅 . Anyway here are some keywords: (Y/N) = Your Name (L/N) = Last Name (H/C) = Hair Colour (H/L) = Hair Length (F/C) = Favourite Colour (S/F/C) = Second Favourite Colour (F/F) = Favorite Food (F/D) = Favourite Drink (F/S) =Favourite Sweet (B/N) = Brother's Name (M/N) = Mother's Name (F/N) = Father's Name __________________________________________________________________________________ You're on college btw and (Y/N) is female. here's a peek at my book. _________________________________________It was a sunday morning and you were making lunch for you and you're roommates. Suddenly you got a call from the headmaster saying that you and your roommates would be having a new roommate and that they would be arriving after lunch. ~Time Skip~ You were playing video games on the couch when you heard a knock on the door. You were confused on why there were knocking on the door because it was Sunday and most of the students were out doing god knows what. Then you suddenly remembered that the headmaster told you that you were having a new roommate today. You opened the door and you see a cute half human half demon boy. "Oh! You must be our new roommate. Nice to meet you, My name's (Y/N) (L/N)." You introduced yourself. "Sup cutie. The names Selever nice to meet you." ............... That's all folks! If you want more of this story, I suggest you read this book. Edit: Just a fair warning. Some chapters may have been jumbled Because of an error so please check the chapters before you read them please.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
↳bnha x denji!reader ❝all i gotta do is rev up and i'm ready to turn anything in my way to sawdust!❞ kicking villain ass is awesome, but I'm really in this hero gig for the chance at a normal life- and boobs, dick too. . bi/pansexual implied reader, masculine! afab! reader . slight romance with various characters, though the story is focused on character development a/n: i fucking love reading and responding to your comments, so make more neoww!!
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