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Ongoing, First published Oct 19, 2017
'"The Loop is just a way to keep things moving." Rome mumbled, the voices shouting his name slowly silencing, for valuable information was about to be released. "If I think something happens that deserves to be done, and done, and done. . ." He spread his hands, showing off the cat's cradle around his fingers. "All I have to do is ask."
"But why?" Corliss pleaded. "Why make me watch and live through pain, over and over again? What lesson are you trying to teach? What do I need to learn."
Rome sighed, looked to the ground and with his sad, depressed voice he said. "Broken hearts are hard to heal."'
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