The World of Olympia

Olympia Pagel-Pan is just an ordinary girl who has flashing red hair and ferocious green eyes. Her only non-problem that causes problems is the fact that she is adopted. It isn't that big of a deal for most of her life, but as she gets older, she discovers more things about her past. And her parents.
These short stories are preludes to a magical story where many crazy things go down. She is mostly normal in these stories, so please sit back and enjoy.

These are all works in progress, so please give me constructive criticism.
The stories are:
1. Bittersweet.