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This is a prologue to a possible novel I'm writing. For now you can look at it as a short story. This "short story" is about a Vampire who doesn't want to really hurt anyone but can't deny her predatory nature. It took up four pages on my Google docs so I have absolutely no clue how it will look on here. This is first time uploading anything so I want your opinions. What needs improvement? Does the ending make you lose interest in going on woth the story? Where do you think I should take this book? What kind of a person is my main character?
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Lucius

To save her brother, Veronica decides to dig up a vampire's grave and must grapple with the dangers that come with fraternizing with a killer. ***** There's a reason buried things should stay buried. Desperate to save her dying brother, Veronica digs up Lucius' grave--a notorious vampire with endearing charm and a thirst for redemption. Ignorant to the spotlight now on her family after releasing a killer back into the world, Veronica must grapple with her new reality while Lucius is forced to finally face the ghosts from his past, pulling him into the hell he helped create. As enemies begin to draw closer, Veronica finds herself having to choose a side, and leaning toward one she never thought she would. [[word count: 80,000-90,000 words]] Cover designed by Ren Tachibana

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