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This is a prologue to a possible novel I'm writing. For now you can look at it as a short story. This "short story" is about a Vampire who doesn't want to really hurt anyone but can't deny her predatory nature. It took up four pages on my Google docs so I have absolutely no clue how it will look on here. This is first time uploading anything so I want your opinions. What needs improvement? Does the ending make you lose interest in going on woth the story? Where do you think I should take this book? What kind of a person is my main character?
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COLE

Rumours of a serial killer arise. And Arielle's sister has gone missing. Meeting Cole, a pessimistic Vampire burdened by his dark past, Arielle recklessly tries to find out more about her sister's disappearance. Even if that means putting herself in danger. Everyone's harboring secrets but someone out there knows what happened the night she disappeared. It's just a matter of time before the truth is uncovered. Content warning: This story contains some scenes with violence.

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