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This is a prologue to a possible novel I'm writing. For now you can look at it as a short story. This "short story" is about a Vampire who doesn't want to really hurt anyone but can't deny her predatory nature. It took up four pages on my Google docs so I have absolutely no clue how it will look on here. This is first time uploading anything so I want your opinions. What needs improvement? Does the ending make you lose interest in going on woth the story? Where do you think I should take this book? What kind of a person is my main character?
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