Beneath your beautiful//Louis Tomlinson//
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\\"Tell a girl she's beautiful she'll believe it for a second, tell her she's ugly and she'll believe it forever."// Rebecca Hall. A girl who looked like she had the perfect family, life , and friends. But on the inside she was broken, used, and depressed. Louis Tomlinson. A boy who looked like he had the perfect family, life, and friends. But on the inside he assumed, hurt, and ruined people. ©2014 Gummy_Bear200. Co-writers: niallerzprincezz ,Harry_Cheeky_Dimples, Perrie22 & Jesy22 {Please do not copy}. Cover:@niallerzprincezzz
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