LOYAL PREDATOR
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Well it's no secret that the best thing about secrets is secrectly telling someone about your secret thereby adding another secret to your secret collection of secrets secretly.
What would you do when you one day realise that all you've ever believed was just a big lie. How far would you go to uncover the truth? Do you even want to know the truth? Can you handle it?
Secrets come in different shapes
and sizes. Big, small, silly, not so silly, astonishing, expected, heart warming, heart breaking, teary, etc. etc. But my favourite type are the secrets that can kill.
Yours,
Loyal Predator.
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This is a teen fiction with humour, mystery, romance, friendship, suspense and drama. Please give atleast three chapters a try before you decide if you want to continue it or not . Remember THREE chapters ;)
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