Broken Zither String (Dropped)
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***This story has been dropped and restarted. Check out my other story: Ink in Water
A Three Lives, Three Worlds: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction.
Summary:
God of War, Mo Yuan, awakens 70,000 years after sacrificing his soul to appease the Bell of Donghua during the Ghost War. After many years of silently harboring feelings for his Seventeenth disciple, Mo Yuan returns to find news of her pending engagement to his twin brother, the Heavenly Crown Prince, Ye Hua. On the other hand, Bai Qian herself, slowly comes to realize that her own feelings towards her master is not as clear cut as she thought. Before either side can fully process their emotions, Mo Yuan's physical health gets thrown into question as the after effects of the soul sacrifice are worse than anticipated.
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There will be some significant changes to the story, the beginning will be rewritten. So the first 5 chapters that have been posted here will not be included. Hopefully you will check in there and continue to follow it once it gets posted. I'll make an announcement here when the other one goes up!
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