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thewanderingpen
Complete, First published Oct 29, 2017
Mature
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****WARNING:  IF YOU DO NOT ENJOY READING SPANKING STORIES (M/F and F/F), THEN THIS IS NOT THE STORY FOR YOU.  YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED****  This is a short story about two best friends, Sabrina and Breanna, who are at the movie theater boisterously critiquing a terrible love movie when one of them gets what they have coming to them.
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