The Strange Amelia
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Last published Sat, Nov 4, 2017
Have you ever been afraid of stupid things? Like the dark, sounds, aliens, or dolls? Well, what if I told you, not everything is what it seems? That such an ordinary story can go so astray in a matter of moments. Follow as Julie, Brian, and Zamora find this out the hard way. They think they are pretend "detectives" investigating a old discarded case. Little did they know, if they keep going the way they are now, it will go to show, some things... are better off undiscovered.
Anyway, hope you enjoy!
This is gonna be the script of a comic, so sorry if it's kinda bad...
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