Heaven

Heaven

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Last published Fri, Feb 21, 2014

Waves of water push my body from left to right, up to down. My arms flail above the Pacific Ocean while the poisonous fluid floods my lungs. I breathe the saltwater. I think I'm losing consciousness. Is this Heaven?

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