The Sentinels
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Tagspost-apocalyptic
Hello everyone!
A short introduction: it's a post-apocalyptic story revolving around the Earth's shifted orbit. Not too fantastic yet but there are several ways to go from here.
I've been planning to rewrite this into either a longer short story or a short novel, but I've been stuck on just the idea so I need some feedback. How do you like the idea in general? Would you like to read more about it? Would a YA development suit it more or should I stick to the sci-fi line and keep Nathan a secondary character?
It's been forever since I've posted anything for public criticism, so I really am looking forward to all sorts of comments, good and bad. Especially bad, so that I know what to work on! (Of course, I few good words for good measure wouldn't hurt ;) )
I hope you enjoy it! :))
P.S.: I did not realise how many works with the same name there are. I was thining of reworking the title anyway...
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