The Ice Planet

The Ice Planet

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The ice planet of Yirin was a peaceful place. The Yirini had not a care in the world, living their lives to the full without such scourges as war, famine or disease, coexisting in harmony. Until, that is, the humans came. Excerpt: The great, roaring firey thing in the sky began to descend towards them, illuminating the night with a bright yellow flame. Down it came, closer and closer... It touched the ground, and the flames vanished. It was a huge thing, tall as a mountain and wider than ten Yirini standing next to each other. It was cylindrical in shape, and it shone and reflected in a way that no Yirinu had ever seen before. A small door in the side opened with a hiss, and a whirr of well oiled cogs... And a strange creature stepped out. P.S. Better quality cover will be uploaded later.
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Imagine if you had the power of the stars in your hands and the existence of a neighbouring planet depended entirely on you and your team. . . There were four people who had powers beyond imagination. One had weaponry, one had memory, another had teleportation and the last had gatherance. It might be hard to believe, but those four were set on a journey to save a neighbouring planet. The journey might change their fate and turn things around. Would they be able to make it, or would they lose everything that they once had? What discoveries would they make, and what would they have to do with them? What would the path that they will choose be, to give up or continue? Will their lives ever be back to normal? The fate of another planet depends on this group... So read on to find out! The sequel of this story is out. If you vote for our story it would mean the world to us :-) Special thanks to our classmate who is now helping us edit grammar and provided the Corean quiz and everyone else who helped to do a part. Note: You may find some parts of the story confusing and theoretically impossible. But this is a fictional world so please understand. Thank you! The story had been recently refurbished so that it will look more organised and has the pictures now. We will start Phase 2 of our renovation process, which will edit the grammar so our story will be wonderful. Stay tuned and vote for us! Thank you fans of The Adventures Of That Particular Group! Cover made by @TheScarlettWolf (YiChen) 2000 views on 9 Aug 2016 P.S Vote us for Wattys! Type our story name then write #MyWattysChoice.

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