[HAITUS] Cool in College

[HAITUS] Cool in College

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Best friends Jeremy and Michael are supposed to dorm together at college, but when a tragic accident happens to Michael, Jeremy is left alone, or so he thinks. He falls into depression and ends up re-activating the squip in hopes that he can help. Shortly after, Michael shows up in his thoughts as his guardian angel. Michael isn't going to lie, he's terrible at his new job. Michael and the Squip often give Jeremy conflicting advice. Will Jeremy go down the right path in his college career, or are there too many voices in his head?
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I begin to navigate the dangerous hall, focusing on a poster on the wall, avoiding any eye contact, trying hard to remain unseen. The posters closer now, and I can read what it says. It's a sign-up sheet for the after school play. Did I say play? I meant getting called gay. That's not what I need right now. I hang a left and there's- "Michael!" ~ Or the one where Jeremy doesn't have a crush on Christine and everything changes. ~ Okay, so just a heads up: this is not something I am proud of. A good portion of the dialogue is forced and the same for some of the actions the characters take. The ending seems to be too out of character to be realistic. I am fully aware that this is not a good story, but I don't have the time or patience to rewrite and fix all of it.

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