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Noticing Them
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Ongoing, First published Feb 20, 2014
He watched as she walk away from him for the first time. He could feel his heart slowly breaking. It was like she was taking a big part of him with her. A part that he didn't want to loose.

He thought about the first time they met, how awkward and silent she was. He thought about how that somehow she intrigued him, drew him in. 

Now sitting there all alone, he prayed that this wasn't the end.
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Felicity Miller is the quiet, awkward and shy girl. Since she could remember she had always lived in her sister's shadow. She wished that she was the cool, confident, pretty girl that her sister was. Felicity was determined to become that girl that she always wanted to be, but it would take a lot more than she thought it would.



Logan Hanson is the confident, charming, smart boy that could capture any girls' heart if he tried. He can't see what he's missing because one special girl has his heart. But one thing stands in the way. She's his best friend's girlfriend.

When these two notice each other for the first time it'll let them see what they've never seen before.
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