So this is my first story on Wattpad, I thought I'd see what you guys think about it.
Please let me know how to improve and what you like about it, constructive criticism is appreciated.
Hope you enjoy :)
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This is my first wattpad story and i wrote this a couple of years ago so sorry if its all over the place. critique as you please, because trust me, i need it