A YA story I'm working on . . . which, yes, is taking time away from Revenant and Tucat 4, I know. But still . . . any writing you can manage is good writing, and this just seemed to mean something important to me. Feedback is appreciated. Don't worry, I'm not in the habit of dropping projects, and I will finish Revenant (as well as start the second novel featuring Joe) and get about it with Tucat 4, which I have literally (figuratively) been *dying* to write, now that the outline is finished. But, you have to follow your muse. And mine brought me to this moment, for some odd reason.