Perfect imperfections
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Ongoing15m
Last published Fri, Nov 24, 2017
This story is about a perfect world. Right? Does every nice thing every perfect day cover up the dystopia we live in?should we fear for what's to come?who might watch us, hear us, know us? Can we trust a single person in this so called "perfect place" that we seem to love?
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