Underwater
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Last published Sat, Jul 7, 2012
Fleour Madelin was having her vacation at her aunt's house, she and her cousin Sunny loves the sea, they walks on the shore,go boating and sometimes swim there.It's so sunny so they plan to go sailing and jump on the water to swim but the weather suddenly change so they need to go sail back home but as they sail back home a tragedy happened causing Fleour's life to change into something complicated, she discover things about her and falls in love in a boy she met on the day the tragedy happened, but things will not be that easy for them.
Now that Fleour knows that she is not a normal person...what do you think will she do? will she accept it or will she pretend that she didn't discovers those things and continue living like a normal one?
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