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Cet ouvrage réunit des critiques de livres wattpad afin d'en tirer des conseils d'écritures...Si vous ne savez plus quoi lire, que vous avez des difficultés pour écrire ou encore que vous souhaitez voir ce que je pense de votre histoire, cet ouvrage est fait pour vous !
Ma main caresse avec une douceur infinie les fines feuilles de l'ouvrage. Je peux sentir le léger grain du papier au bout des mes doigts. Les caractères s'alignent, formant tour à tour milles mots différents sous mes yeux ébahis. C'est la magie de l'écriture... Celle là même qui fait qu'aucun texte ne se ressemble, qui crée en mon esprits tant de sons, d'images, de sensations. L'écriture.
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