Treasures beyond the stars
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Last published Thu, Nov 23, 2017
This is my first story so please give me feedback and tips
This is a first person view story about a adventurer who was originally a medic for a army called the Vultures and is now a bounty hunter due to his opinion what they where doing. He Meets a strange mysterious man in a Tavern that gives him a deal he can not refuse.
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