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Fallen Angel

Fallen Angel

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The young Angel stood in front of her higher up. "Batya Alvara," God himself said, his voice booming across the great hall. She immediately bowed down, flinching at the mention of her true name. "Rise up, my child. No need to be formal." Batya rose and stared blankly at the floor. This was part of the issue of why she was sent down to Earth. The divine child was emotionless. She didn't feel joy, sadness, anger, or even love. "You know what you did, my child," God announced after a few long minutes of silence. She nodded her head, not looking up to meet his strong gaze. "Tell me, why would you do such a thing?" "Father, I can't feel anything. I don't feel sorry. I don't feel guilt. I don't feel anything at all," she answered, finally meeting his eyes. God sighed and closed his eyes. He knew what he had to do, even if it was his own child. He opened his closed eyes. "Batya, you are hereby banned from Heaven from this day forth for putting the other Angels in danger of letting Demons from Hell come into this sacred place." Tears fell from his eyes. He quickly wiped them away and continued speaking. "You are now a Fallen Angel. You may not return until you find love and happiness." Batya nodded and stood prepared for what was going to happen. "I love you, Batya," God whispered. The air around her started to blow wildly, tossing her hair around like a plastic bag. A single tear slid down her cheek as she replied with, "I would hope so." Then, a bright light surrounded her. Everyone who was in the room at the time had to look away or it would blind them. God rose off of his throne and spoke two words, "Addio, figlia." The light exploded and when it cleared, Batya was gone.
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"Who are you?" I demand. The boy in front of me replies, "That's not how this works, love." I freeze. That phrase. That voice. It can't be. I look up but he's just a cloaked silhouette. The rustling stops when boys surrounding us step from their hiding spots and light lanterns. Every single one of them masked and cloaked. Except the one in front of me. The lamps lit, and I see his face. "Whoa," slips from my lips as I stare at the boy in front of me. His eyes widen and his jaw almost, just almost, drops. With his guard down for that one instant I lose all fear and gain control. "You!" I yell suddenly overflowing with anger. My stomach heats with rage. I fight to stand, stronger this time with anger as fuel. He backs up, his breath increasing. Obviously, uneasy, I take it as a win and almost stand all the way. "You. What are you doing here? How did you find this place!" He switched to angry. "You! You're the reason! They put me back because of you! It was all cause of you! It was your fault! All of it!" I'm so angry I yell only what I can. My thoughts flying through my head I can only yell unexplained nonsense. I've never felt anger like this before. The red glow lightly pours off my own skin and I take notice to it. I compare it to the glow coming off of him. Suddenly, it's an instinct to allow the anger to explode and in doing so the red glow is taken from his chest as I absorb it all and throw it out in all directions. I yank down away from the boy holding me just as the red glow gets sucked from him, absorbed into my hands, and then thrown out in a sphere of red glow. All boys stumbling but not by much and the one holding me gets knocked back, I'm free. "You die now, Peter Pan!"

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