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FGOD Error: THE LAST LAUGH.
He had enough. They didn't appreciate him. He tried so many times to explain to them why he did it. They wouldn't believe him. So why should he keep protecting an ungrateful multiverse that beats him down for doing what he's supposed to do? Cover art isn't mine, and this is inspired by harrish6. Oh right I forgot to mention, there will be some things in here that has triggers, so if you are sensitive in ANY life-threatening way, then I beg you PLEASE don't read this book. Thanks! #1 inksans #1 fgoderror #1 error BRUH I LOST ALL THE GOOD RANKINGS #1 harrish6 #1 hwhbb Started: December 10, 2019 Finished: April 23, 2020 BOOK 1Complete
The Ultimate Romance Awards
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The Race of Gloom - Write to Rank 2021 Submission
This book is the submission for the contest of Write to Rank 2021 in which every chapter represents different themes given by the contest's admins with the main genre of action. Every chapter would be a different story thus this is a book of mini stories with made-up prompts. The Write to Rank contest is held by @action ---- Chapter 1 (White Belt): 100 words of running from a crime scene. Framed or guilty? Chapter 2 (Yellow Belt): 500 words of the epic banter between good and evil. Chapter 3 (Orange Belt): 800 words of a trip gone wrong, action-packed and fast. Chapter 4 (Green Belt): 1.2k words of mystery and action mashup. Write in active voice! Chapter 5 (Blue Belt): 1.2k words of scifi and action mashup. Reaction more than telling. Chapter 6 (Purple Belt): 1.2k words of historical fiction and action mashup. Show don't tell! Chapter 7 (Brown Belt): 2k words one-shot of a clear protagonist and antagonist, cliffhanger, and the line "If we do this, there's no turning back." Chapter 8 (Red Belt): 3k words of action fanfiction from a beloved and famous fandom of either movies or games or shows. I personally chose The Last of Us. Chapter 9: 5-10k words of action fast paced short story with character development and active voice. Show don't tell. Completed: Jul 19, 2021Complete
Be Your Own Miracle
UNDER EDITING THE ONE'S EDITED ARE MARKED WITH ✅ This is a challenge for everyone who are interested to transform there self's . If you are not a person to take a challenge then you are not allowed to read further . I will be posting a challenge a day , each day for the next 30 days . Let's make the next year the best year . Top Rankings :-[ 01 / 08 / 2024 ] 1 in motivation [ 09/07/2025 ] 1 in bookshelf [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in motivationalquotes [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in bookshelf [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in selfhelpbook [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in selfhelpbooks [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in booksbooksbooks [ 01/08/2024 ] 1 in nonfictionbook [ 14/01/2025 ]Complete
i accidentally met dream
Next person after next, waiting for my shift to end. I call the next person in line over to me and start with my normal greeting as well as "do you have rewards?" His voice was familiar, but I couldn't quite pinpoint it. -------------- dream x reader (she/her, fem!) reader's pov at all times unless specified otherwise spotify playlist based on this book: (https://open.spotify.com/playlist/0Kp0kUO9HDkGd2k0458bsP?si=YMTxOCmAQGqtdyhrtPf4YQ&utm_source=copy-link)Complete
The King's Queen (Nightmare Sans x Reader)
PLEASE READ BEFORE GETTING INTO THE STORY Description: Your name is (Y/n) and you are originally from an au called Dreamtale! Your life hadn't been the easiest however, but you were quick to always move forward despite this... Before Nightmare had become corrupted, you were his best friend and lover. You kept him from his breaking point, you maintained his sanity and most importantly... returned his love. One thing that is definitely important about yourself is that you are a selective mute... And your only desired partner for conversation is the King of Negativity himself... But what will happen once the true evil lurking within your lover drowns out whatever light he had left? What will happen when you discover that the Nightmare you knew was replaced by a monster that still somehow holds love for you? "And even with the evil finally in control of Nightmare, if both his sinister side and his old self agreed on something- then it would always be his priority... They both love her." This is practically my first story that I have ever decided to share online. It is quite a terrifying experience for me, so I hope that anyone who decides to read this will enjoy it. Anyway, I should probably inform my readers about a few things. First off, my primary language is not English, however, I will still be making an effort with my grammar! Second off, I will try and update this as frequently as possible... Even though I can get somewhat shy or concerned about how my work goes. Otherwise, all you will need to know is this: (Y/n): Your name (F/n): Friend name (E/c): Eye color (H/l): Hair Length (H/c): Hair color (S/c): Skin color (F/c): Favorite color Some things I will likely determine for the reader, but what is posted above will be the basics. Please also note that this story may contain some content that would be best for more mature audiences. Also, the cover image belongs to me, please do not use it without permission or steal it.Complete!["My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/268673945-256-k202187.jpg)
"My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED]
Hello! This is my first book so there will probably be some Errors but i'll try my best to fix it. Also English is not my native language so pardon my bad grammar😅😅😅 . Anyway here are some keywords: (Y/N) = Your Name (L/N) = Last Name (H/C) = Hair Colour (H/L) = Hair Length (F/C) = Favourite Colour (S/F/C) = Second Favourite Colour (F/F) = Favorite Food (F/D) = Favourite Drink (F/S) =Favourite Sweet (B/N) = Brother's Name (M/N) = Mother's Name (F/N) = Father's Name __________________________________________________________________________________ You're on college btw and (Y/N) is female. here's a peek at my book. _________________________________________It was a sunday morning and you were making lunch for you and you're roommates. Suddenly you got a call from the headmaster saying that you and your roommates would be having a new roommate and that they would be arriving after lunch. ~Time Skip~ You were playing video games on the couch when you heard a knock on the door. You were confused on why there were knocking on the door because it was Sunday and most of the students were out doing god knows what. Then you suddenly remembered that the headmaster told you that you were having a new roommate today. You opened the door and you see a cute half human half demon boy. "Oh! You must be our new roommate. Nice to meet you, My name's (Y/N) (L/N)." You introduced yourself. "Sup cutie. The names Selever nice to meet you." ............... That's all folks! If you want more of this story, I suggest you read this book. Edit: Just a fair warning. Some chapters may have been jumbled Because of an error so please check the chapters before you read them please.Complete
𝒫𝓇ℴ𝓋ℯ 𝒴ℴ𝓊𝓇𝓈ℯ𝓁𝒻 || 𝚂𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚞𝚜 𝚂𝚗𝚊𝚙𝚎 𝚡 𝚁𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚎𝚛 || 𝔹𝕠𝕠𝕜 𝟙 ||
✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷ "I'm not sure how I can go on any longer Severus. I don't know how to just see you as a friend." "You have to Y/N. There's no other option. No matter how badly we want it." ✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷ A story of how Severus and Y/N became friends, coworkers, and possibly something more. **story starts off with younger Y/N and Severus, then leads to where the books start, and goes through the first 4 books of Harry Potter!** VERY SLOW BURN ⚠️TW - suicidal thoughts - self harm - abuse - sexual assault - mature content - smut (Please be kind!! This is my very first story I have written and I want to make sure that it's enjoyable and goes according to timeline❤️) ❗️I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE HARRY POTTER CHARACTERS - ONLY Y/N AND PARENTS❗️ (I do plan on writing another book about the remaining of the story to cover the entire Harry Potter series, starting off where this one will end at the end of Goblet of Fire) Enjoy my little dungeon bats!!!!🤍🦇 REVIEWS ☎️ "OMG, THIS BOOK IS SO GOOD❤️❤️❤️❤️" - @MaduTiet "Yes I enjoyed THIS WAS MY FAV BOOK EEVRRRRRRRR AND I WILL BE WAITING PATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT ONE AND IM SURE ITLL BE AWESOMEEEEE" - @canyonstarss 🏆RANKINGS 🥇#readerxsnape 🥇#alanrickman 🥇#potionmaster 🥇#snapexreader 🥇#proveyourself 🥉#hogwartsprofessor ☝🏼word count : 121,513☝🏼Complete![Slytherins Heir [Draco X Reader]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/183028687-256-k954034.jpg)
Slytherins Heir [Draco X Reader]
~ Year one ~ Warning: this is a journey through all of the books / movies so if you want a quick read, over and done with, I don't believe this is for you. If you are here to stay great and I'll do my best to keep you posted. ******************** Y/n, a rich pureblood witch in the wizarding world. Y/n has just turned eleven, the girl receives a letter from Hogwarts. In hopes of being one great wizard to live up to her parents expectations, the girl becomes friends with the golden trio and working to change the way people see Slytherin Y/n will face many challenges through her years. The young girl will meet friend and foe through her years at Hogwarts but must find out who is what. Even more she must find out where her loyalties lie. ******************** #2 in dracoxreader ⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️ (Y/n = Your name) (F/c= Favourite colour) (L/n = Last name) (h/c = hair colour ) ( h/l = Hair length) (e/c= eye colour) ( y/c = your city) (M/n = mother name)Complete
ZOE SUPPORT CLUB!
BASED ON REAL LIFE STORIES... First, welcome to the first ever and most active support club! We whole heartedly welcome you amazing people who have battled their fights like real heroes and never gave up. Your scars are the tattoos of your bravery, strength and courage. Support club provides you a platform to share your real life experiences with the world. You've the right to speak you opinion, let everyone hear you. Let people know, how strong and fearless you're. This is a place where everyone will listen to you, help you, catch you, heal you but will never let you fail. "It's okay to be tired, you're allowed to take a strategic time out. But giving up is not an option. Get up, stand up, fix your crown and play the resume button on your life." You can share anything and everything you want. Even the silliest of problems, because no problem is silly if it can disturb your mind. Even if you're tensed about, why isn't my book geting a better response, then we will help you out of it as well. Trouble just knocked your door? Support club is your call! Anything and everything, any time and anywhere! We are waiting to listen to your battles, all you've to do is pour them out. No one will judge, no one will comment, it's just you and your amazing tales. We will try our best to provide solutions; from boyfriend troubles to sick of office work, from teenage dramas to emotional issues, from mental scars to irrational fight: we are here for you!Complete
The Chamber of Secrets - Harry Potter Male Reader Insert
Y/N: Your Name L/N: Last Name H/C: Hair Colour E/C: Eye Colour S/C: Skin Colour F/C: Favorite Colour F/F: Favorite Food --------------------------------------------------------------- Following after the events of his first year, Y/N L/N attends his second year of Hogwarts, to be introduced to a self-absorbed new DADA teacher and, along with Harry Potter, is accused of being the heir of Slytherin, due to the Chamber Of Secrets being reopened... ---------------------------------------------------------------- Book 2 of 7 Hermione x Male Reader Please read the Philosopher's Stone before reading this one. Any writing you may recognise belongs to J. K. Rowling. All rights belong to JK Rowling, except my OC's and Y/N belongs to yourself. This story is heavily inspired by the great Male Reader Harry Potter fan fictions I've read.Complete
Mackenzie's Critique Shop
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My Babies Mystery Daddy. (Completed March 2021)
(Mature content) (Highest ranks listed) (Editing slowly) A simple last night out with my girls before I move to America. Drinks are flowing, hips moving & laughing like we have no worries in the world, & an encounter with a drop dead gorgeous man, whos eyes could see my soul like we belonged & his hands ohh 🤪 but I left before he woke mortified. I never had a one night stand. Only problem now is I left with something belonging to him. So here I am 4 years later and my boss is retiring. Who's my new boss you ask. Well you guessed it & Does he remember me? I hope not as theirs more than my feelings at stake now. *********************************** Eoin Ryder now 29 year old badboy billionaire. Eoin cant get a girl named Saoirse (sheer-sha) out of his head for years. That one incredible night has had him searching for that connection again. He dates but nothing to serious as he compares them to her beauty. Is there such thing as love at first sight. Will he find her again. If so what will he do. What will she do. Though he is in for a shock. Laughter, tears, anger, sex & possible loss. This book has it all. Hey everyone 😁 this is my 1st ever book/story to write & writing it from my phone. If its boring or silly I do apologise. Im writing chapters as I go so please be kind and i would love feedback and ideas for this story. I Started it 20-dec-2020. I thought id give it ago & to have a new focus point to steadying out my anxiety. Never done anything like this before. feel free to point out mistakes nicely im trying to edit quickly. Also the pregnancies are sort of based on my experiences. Also copywrited. Mature content will be present so please dont read if this will offend you or under age. Hightest rank 1st #daddy (sept) 1st #Irish (may 21) 1st #over18s (may-now) 2nd #single (feb23) 2nd #2021 (may 2021) 2nd #accidental (may 2021) 3rd #soul (may 2021) 4th #lover (june 2021) 6th #sexual (june 2021) 10th #love (may 2021) 11th #growth (june 2021)Complete
At Your Service {The Princess and The Butler}
What would it be like to experience love through services? . . . If you like PPGz x RRBz, cheesiness, and somewhat complications, this book is totally for you! No summary is needed, if curious then just read! Enjoy ^0^ Started:22 September 2018 Completed: 2 November 2022 (took me 4 years T_T)Complete
𝐀 𝐁𝐨𝐲 𝐈𝐧 𝐘𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐃𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐭 𝐌𝐞𝐬𝐚𝐠𝐠𝐞𝐬 || ℳ. ℛ𝑒𝑜
↳ 𝐈𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐟𝐮𝐥 morning as you roamed the halls of your school. Walking side by side with your best friend; 𝕹𝖆𝖌𝖎 𝕾𝖊𝖎𝖘𝖍𝖎𝖗𝖔, you usually call him 𝕾𝖊𝖎 as you were close friends since childhood. It was quite a peaceful walk until a certain purple head decided to join you. ------------------------⤍⬎ ♯⤿ 𝐀 𝕸𝖎𝖐𝖆𝖌𝖊 𝕽𝖊𝖔 x Gender neutral Reader story. ღ⥽ 𝐀 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐢𝐧𝐯𝐨𝐥𝐯𝐢𝐧𝐠 some light textfics<33 ♯⤿ 𝐈𝐧𝐯𝐨𝐥𝐯𝐞𝐬 𝐛𝐚𝐝 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐬 and manga spoilers, please be reminded this was before 𝕽𝖊𝖔 and 𝕹𝖆𝖌𝖎 got into blue lock! ღ⥽ 𝐃𝐞𝐭𝐚𝐢𝐥𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 information on the first chapter. ♯⤿ 𝕽𝖊𝖔 might be a little to ooc so please be aware. ⇥ 𝐇𝐨𝐩𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲!! ⇥ 𝐌𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐢𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐫𝐭𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐥𝐲 𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐭𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐌𝐮𝐧𝐞𝐲𝐮𝐤𝐢 𝐊𝐚𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐫𝐨, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐘𝐮𝐬𝐮𝐤𝐞 𝐍𝐨𝐦𝐮𝐫𝐚 ! (My first story I written since like forever, ignore the cringe 😔) ------------------------⤃⬏ 𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐝 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐭; 26,517 𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝; 1/10/23 𝐄𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝; 2/14/23Complete
writing motivation and tips
As the title says, a safe space for you and I to share anything related to writing. I'll share mine, you share yours. Let's help each other and grow this community together. (Taking a break for now, you are welcome to check what this is all about <33)Complete
Reasons I Will Not Give Your Story a Chance
I have standards and I'm not afraid to use it! This is a list of story turn-offs that makes me hit the back button and never look at your story again. # # # # # Highest ranking: 275 in Non-Fiction!Complete
Chamber by Chamber // Snowbaz
SO bitches I'm a lonely blob just trying to pass the time writing stuff she loves in hopes it may bring some other peeps feelings, too. Any comments or feedback is totally appreciated. Anyway, I also post all of these on Tumblr and some on ao3 if you wanna go check those out. My Tumblr Username: @thesmalltowngal My ao3 Username: @TheSmallTownGirl Highest Ranks: #1 - mlm #1 - rainbowrowell #1 - carryon #1 - simonsnowComplete
He had enough. They didn't appreciate him. He tried so many times to explain to them why he did it. They wouldn't believe him. So why should he keep protecting an ungrateful multiverse that beats him down for doing what he's supposed to do? Cover art isn't mine, and this is inspired by harrish6. Oh right I forgot to mention, there will be some things in here that has triggers, so if you are sensitive in ANY life-threatening way, then I beg you PLEASE don't read this book. Thanks! #1 inksans #1 fgoderror #1 error BRUH I LOST ALL THE GOOD RANKINGS #1 harrish6 #1 hwhbb Started: December 10, 2019 Finished: April 23, 2020 BOOK 1
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