Perfect
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I finish putting on my last coat of cotton candy lip-gloss. I look in the mirror and give myself one last confident smile before I head to school. My makeup is perfect, my blonde hair is pin-straight and my clothes don't have one wrinkle in them. I head downstairs, grab my backpack and head to my bus stop. The smell of fresh dew welcomes me as I open my front door. I walk to my bus stop and sit down on the damp, cold bench. After about 10 minutes, I hear a chirpy and slightly annoying voice. "Hey Ella! I love your outfit!" The voice is coming from Jessica. I can't help thinking her overly excited voice is too much for 7:00 am. Jessica has naturally curly, short brown hair that falls right abover her shoulder. She has dark brown eyes and always wear the brightest colors she can find. I smile back at her. "Hey. Thanks. I like your hair." It's true. I really did like her hair. It was in her natural curls pulled back by a light blue headband. She giggled. "Thanks Ella, but it's nothing compared to yours! Mine is a boring brown. Yours is blonde and straight! It's perfect." These are the sentences that make me cringe. Especially the last word. Perfect. It's what everyone thinks my life is. But what they don't know, is that it's anything but perfect. My name is Ella Hawkins and this is just the beginning of my story.
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COMPLETED!!! here's a snip bit ! "Hey Belle" he said with a cheeky smile. I look up and give him the fakest smile i can put on "did my constant harasser also become my stalker?" i said referring to him saying my name before looking back at my computer. He sat down next to me. "Not a stalker or a harasser just an acquaintance" he said before continuing "also i got your name from your friend, also let her know i do not want her please and thank you" he said before getting up "she doesn't want you either" i responded not moving my eyes from the screen "definitely not what she said last night" he said flashing me a smile which i rolled my eyes to. I was sincerely praying he was grabbing his stuff to go so i wouldn't have another interaction with him, but of course not. His friend left and he came back and sat by me. "I'm trying to do homework can you please go somewhere else" i said in a heavily annoyed tone. "See i would, but one i think you like me too much to actually want me to leave" he said before i cut him off "i don't" he laughed before continuing "this next part is really gonna suck then" he said pausing obviously waiting for a reaction out of me which i don't give him. "fine. you're no fun. we have to schedule our tutoring times" he said before nudging me "i'm your first student to tutor surprise!" he said in a tone that i can only describe as annoying because that's all he is, is annoying. I look up at his face that's gleaming with joy purely because i'm annoyed.

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