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Who Says You're the One in Control?
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Complete, First published Nov 26, 2017
Papyrus is dead. As are over 100 of the monsters in the Underground.
Now it was just Chara against Sans in the Last Corridor. Already prepared to die here, Sans fights more out of responsibility than anything else. Simply waiting to die, and that would be the end. At least until next round, right?
Unfortunately, Chara has other plans.

!!Warning: language is a thing in here

**This is MY story from Archive of our Own. I'm copying in here for more people to enjoy**
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