The Critic (h.s)
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Last published Wed, Sep 5, 2018
Harry Styles, the avid Wattpad user with multiple hit stories, and is notoriously known for his rather blunt and unforgiving critiques of others stories. What happens when he stumbles upon the wrong girl's story, and she is persistent on meeting him?
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"You want to know what the problem with your stories are? You make it so blatantly obvious that you've never been in love before."
"Then you've never had good sex. Maybe I could help you find a good fuck then, so you could start writing about it."
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