The Omission Behind Ones Devotion
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"I knew this girl.
A girl with long golden blonde hair that seemed to go on for miles and deep forest green eyes that any living, breathing soul would get trapped in, I knew this girl.
In the state of Florida, I knew a girl.
A girl who took your breath away without trying, made your heart pound faster than you've ever thought could, I knew this girl.
Out of the 20 million people living in Florida, she somehow stumbled into my life.
I met a girl, her name is Hayden Thompson, and this is our story."
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