The Omission Behind Ones Devotion
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  • Reads 1,685
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  • Parts 32
  • Time 3h 46m
Ongoing, First published Nov 29, 2017
"I knew this girl. 
A girl with long golden blonde hair that seemed to go on for miles and deep forest green eyes that any living, breathing soul would get trapped in, I knew this girl. 
In the state of Florida, I knew a girl. 
A girl who took your breath away without trying, made your heart pound faster than you've ever thought could, I knew this girl. 
Out of the 20 million people living in Florida, she somehow stumbled into my life. 
I met a girl, her name is Hayden Thompson, and this is our story."
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