Lost in Wonderland

Lost in Wonderland

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Alice was an ordinary girl; nothing extraordinary about her. However, a few nights after her 15th birthday, she begins to have strange dreams. The haunting dreams don’t stop in her sleep; she starts hallucinating in the waking world as well. But when she tries to find the source of these bizarre delusions, she discovers more than what she bargained for. Follow young Alice as she sets off on her perilous journey to find out why she is being plagued with these dreams. Note: This is my first story, so please don't critique too harshly. However, I would appreciate feedback, and if you have tips for me about my writing, feel free to post them; I'm open to new ideas and such. Leave a comment, vote, or even become my fan if you like this story. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy.
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In a world where the future isn't written but echoed, 17-year-old Lila hears the whispers of events yet to happen - but they're not hers. The echo she's been hearing for months is someone else's life, someone's fate, and that someone is in danger. As she tries to uncover the identity of the person behind the mysterious echoes, Lila finds herself caught in a web of secrets, shadowy figures, and a powerful organization that will do anything to keep their plans hidden. Can she stop what's coming before it's too late, or will the echoes become her own fate? First Chapter (Excerpt): I've always heard things. It started when I was younger - whispers of something I couldn't see, couldn't understand. At first, it was just faint sounds, like voices drifting from another world. But by the time I was sixteen, those whispers turned into something more - echoes. Clear, distinct, and impossible to ignore. It's strange. Most people think the future is something that hasn't happened yet. But for me, it's not that simple. I hear the future. The thing is, the future I hear isn't mine. I've been hearing her - a girl I don't know, yet know everything about. Her life, her fears, her pain. I can't explain how, but I hear her voice every night, calling out for help. I don't know her name. I don't know her face. All I know is that something horrible is coming for her. And if I can't stop it... then her fate might echo into mine. Tonight, I hear her again. The echo sharpens, clearer than ever before. "Help me, Lila. It's happening. They're coming." The echo fades. And just like that, I'm left with a choice - follow the voice, or ignore it and risk the consequences. I don't know why it's me she's calling to, but I can't just do nothing. I owe it to her. And to myself.

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