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Murder Feels Awful (An Empath Detective Mystery, Book 1)

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***1ST PLACE WINNER for MYSTERY/THRILLER in THE BELLE AME AWARDS 2K18! ***

What if you could feel people's secret emotions?

And you went and tried to use it to catch murderers.

(Maybe this wasn't the best plan...)

Mark Falcon has a secret. He can "vibe" other people's emotions... and they're usually super painful.

Up to now, he's kept his power secret.

But at the funeral for a pilot who dies on a mysterious solo flight, he senses a secret hate.

He knows he's vibed the murderer .. but he can't tell who it was.

He'll need to learn to use his power for real, and fast, if he wants to hunt the killer.

The good news: he's got me. I'm Pete, his super-cheerful new sidekick/housemate.

The bad news: our local cop detective thinks Mark is crazy.

Also, her default mode is Angry Viking Goddess. And the last thing she wants is some delusional "psychic" playing amateur sleuth.

(Not to mention hitting on her.)

With the cops threatening jail, small-town secrets threatening Mark's sanity, and a crazy-gorgeous doctor suspect threatening my heart, time's running out for Mark and I to catch the killer...

Before the killer catches us.

Murder Feels Awful is the very first Empath Detective novel, a new humorous psychic detective cozy mystery series that totally really happened, but is officially fiction. 

This novel is complete and published on Amazon (https://billalive.com/murder-feels-awful). But you can read it on Wattpad, chapter by chapter, right now. I'll post a new chapter every Wednesday. Just click that lovely orange button ...All Rights Reserved

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Impulse Of The Heart by Christel_Loubser

"Good evening Mr Cunningham. My name is Ava and I'll be your waiter for tonight. What would you like to drink?" "I 'll have a passion fruit juice special." "Are you sure don't you have a serious allergy to pineapple." " Yes, how do you know that? Is the surprise pineapple?" How did she know that I was allergic to pineapple no one knows about that but my family and even they sometimes forget. **** I lay on this bed my eyes closed trying to get my heart beat to go down. I won't survive this much longer. I need to take a long bath. I open the tap and fill the bathtub with warm water. I grab one of Dale's shower washes and threw some in. I lay in the bathtub full of bubbles and trying to relax. The door opens and Dale walks in. "Ava, I thought you were asleep." "I was trying to but I couldn't fall asleep so I decided to take a bath." "Is there enough space for me to?" I really like this flirting but come on. "Nope." I say popping the P. "You sure?" My heart is going crazy. "Yup." I say popping the P. "Okay when you are done I have a surprise for you." What type of surprise I ask myself? "Don't looks so worried. Not that kind of surprise." He left and closed the door. **** When old friends meet again after a few years and fall in love, will their love survive when a stalker goes out of his way to get to them, A mother wanting revenge from the past and all of their secrets come's out? #111 - cc #161 - protection

I've Become Like Him by KittenWoman99

"Ahhh!!!" The man's body falls to the floor limp and I fall to the floor out of terror, "Why are you screaming? I saved you from being raped." I look at the man who is holding a gun with a little smile on his face. He holds the gun up to my head and I start crying, "P-Please, p-please don't do this. I-I won't tell anybody." He bends down and I whimper, "I don't think I can let you go. What happened you run and tell in the next three days? You've already seen my face and heard my voice." I shake my head, "I swear I won't tell anybody! I-I don't know anybody!" He looks at me up and down, "I'll give you two choices. I kill you now or you come with me. You can keep me entertained for a while." €€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€ Lyric Dime is a twenty-one year old loner who works in a top tier casino. She has no friends or family and she lives alone in a nice apartment. She's well off, so there's nothing she should complain about. Lyric doesn't talk much so that's why it's hard for her to make any friends or meet new people. But happens when she see someone get murdered in front and has no choice to listen to the killer? €€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€ I notice that most of my readers hate crying so I'm going to warn you all. The main female character cries a lot and I mean a lot. You have all be warned. Lol. Cover By: @thenovelbully

My Vampire Prince by Mahima_wagle

"Hello, are you there ?" "Yes, I am. I will always be there." "Can I ask you something?" "Sure my love." "Why don't I feel scared of you? I am here, in my room, talking to a stranger who is invisible, I don't even know your full name. But..but I feel attracted towards you. I feel like you are very near to my heart. Why do I feel like this? Isn't this wrong?" "That is because you are my beloved, love." "Beloved? Do you mean "vampire-kinda-beloved"?" "Yes darling," he replied. "But how do I believe you?" Suddenly my surroundings became darker. A figure started to appear in front of my eyes. He was tall, porcelain-skinned, pure black eyes, jet black hair, well built, wearing a white t-shirt and jeans along with a black jacket. He was standing there looking like a Greek god while I was sitting on my bed with a messy bun on my head and a tub of ice-cream, looking a homeless person. I was staring at him as if he was the 8th wonder of the world. "Wait a minute, you are ...y-you.." "Yes, I am " This is not a prologue. It's just an insight into what the book is about. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my first book .. so have a little mercy on me... sorry if it's very bad ... hope you enjoy reading it. Highest ranking #1 on June 19th 2016 (OMG) AT FIRST, YOU MIGHT FEEL THAT IT IS BASED ON TWILIGHT SERIES OR ITS A FAN FICTION OF TWILIGHT, BUT IT IS NOT! IT IS A TOTALLY DIFFERENT STORY! JUST DON'T STOP READING THE BOOK AFTER FIRST FIVE CHAPTERS.

The Blood We Shed by leovaldezshotstuff

Daisy Smart is just a normal girl...right? This book is based off of me (Daisy) and my childhood friend group. It's about a small group of kids classified as "Starbearers" and they have that identity, because they all have a star mark on a random part of the body. There is a group called "Starhunters" looking for kids all over the USA with it, because the star mark means they have a secret superpower that they have to discover on their own. If they are found, then they are captured and taken to a place where they suffer until they die. Daisy is ten (she gradually gets older) and from Lexington, Kentucky. She lives with her little brother, Aiden Smart, and her parents. Her parents favor Aiden more and ignore their daughter's mental health needs. One day, Daisy is not able to control her actions, leading to her family's deaths. She runs away and meets a seven year old named Maya, who was abandoned as a baby due to her mark. Maya is very mature for her age and helps Daisy. Maya tells her about the star mark and Daisy discovers it on her back. Maya tells her everything about the Starhunters and Starbearers, making Daisy very angry and upset. Daisy promises Maya that she will change this fucked up world, but will she? (I want to make a sequel for this, but idk what to write about in that yet. That's where everyone in my childhood friend group will be in. In this one, there's only half of them.)

Taunt by meepsahir

"Can we stop feeling guilty, Amelia? Guilty for all the things that weren't our fault." "We can Leo. Maybe someday." "That day isn't far off Amelia. I'll make sure of it." ___________________________________ There is a lot to think about when you find out your best friend has been raped and murdered. There is even more to think about when you're the last person she saw the night she died. But that's not what caused me to black out in the middle of a rocking party scene, surrounded by all the people I had known all my life. It was when I saw who had killed her. Hilarious, charming, the guy with the perfect quiff, and star quarter-back of the football team. He was loved by everyone. He was the guy you couldn't stay away from. Levi Harrison. My brother. ____________________________ #1 for General Fiction in The Grace Awards 2019 #1 College Romance 11/19 #3 Bullyingawareness 04/20 #2 Assault 06/20 • Started: August 2018 Ended: - January 2020 (Unedited) • WARNING: this book contains a mature theme, not suitable for all audiences. There are recurring themes of assault, mild depression, and violence. On the other hand: it'll put a big fat smile on your face! •Any media used belongs to it's rightful owners. No images or videos used belong to me.•

Drake's Kitten (completed) by Yellow1017

He once told me no one knows the real him.I didn't think he meant it, and not in a good way. He is a straight A student, and everyone knows it, not to mention he is on the swim team. All that though isn't the real him, the real him hides deep within himself. ---------- "Can you please tell me what that was?" I nearly shout at him. All I get is silence. He keeps his back to me. "Please, I need some explanation." I beg. I stay still as he stops dead in his tracks. His body is tense and it's scarring me. He turns around slowly to face me with his hands at his sides. His eyes meet mine, but there is no spark of any emotion in them. They are cold and dark making me look away not being able to hold his deadly stare. I feel uneasy under his gaze, and i feel his eyes burning a hole in the side of my face. "No, I won't explain because it's not important." He says in a low, almost, growl. I flinch and look back into his eyes. I feel hurt by his words and I don't know why, but I know he sees it in my eyes. His faces flashes with regret but it's quickly covered up with his faces going back to it's hard cold look. I feel my heart stop and my face go pale. His look terrified me making me hold my breath. "Breath." He orders. I start to breathe again and just blink at him. "Now go." He orders me again. I flinch involuntarily at his tone and jump back slightly. "Please don't let me walk home alone." I beg in a quiet voice, looking down at my feet. The next thing I see are his black combat boots right in front of my shoes. I look up into his eyes and he looks down into mine confusion written all over his face. "How come you aren't running yet?" He questions searching my eyes. "I just can't walk home alone, please I'm scared." I hear him chuckle. "You aren't afraid of me? What can possibly be scarier than me?" He asks. "Well, I know you will keep me safe." "Why is that?" He questions raising an eyebrow at me. "You haven't hurt me." "Yet." He mutters, but I roll my eyes.

Before It Struck Midnight. *COMPLETE* by Strale26

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The Witches on BellaRow Street by ElleJNior

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Pretty Crazy by Geeky_and_Freaky

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(REWRITING) The Skylar Experiment : Coveting by NoppityNope666

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Impulse Of The Heart

"Good evening Mr Cunningham. My name is Ava and I'll be your waiter for tonight. What would you like to drink?" "I 'll have a passion fruit juice special." "Are you sure don't you have a serious allergy to pineapple." " Yes, how do you know that? Is the surprise pineapple?" How did she know that I was allergic to pineapple no one knows about that but my family and even they sometimes forget. I lay on this bed my eyes closed trying to get my heart beat to go down. I won't survive this much longer. I need to take a long bath. I open the tap and fill the bathtub with warm water. I grab one of Dale's shower washes and threw some in. I lay in the bathtub full of bubbles and trying to relax. The door opens and Dale walks in. "Ava, I thought you were asleep." "I was trying to but I couldn't fall asleep so I decided to take a bath." "Is there enough space for me to?" I really like this flirting but come on. "Nope." I say popping the P. "You sure?" My heart is going crazy. "Yup." I say popping the P. "Okay when you are done I have a surprise for you." What type of surprise I ask myself? "Don't looks so worried. Not that kind of surprise." He left and closed the door. When old friends meet again after a few years and fall in love, will their love survive when a stalker goes out of his way to get to them, A mother wanting revenge from the past and all of their secrets come's out? #111 - cc #161 - protection