A Snowy Winter Afternoon

his is a story I've started writing recently so I thought, why not post it here, right?

It's about a boy who gets transported to a fantasy world with his friend (Super Original right?). But I just want to address that I'm not thinking about making a harem, falling into a dungeon or an op mc (at least not unreasonably op) story. I'm trying to be a bit different so this isn't the only thing to the story. I already have an ending in mind but don't be afraid to point out mistakes and give me tips about how the story should proceed. If I like your idea I might take it into the story.

Since I'm edgy it will be pretty gore and dark. But not in an overwhelming or unreasonable way. But more like not being afraid to depict violence. I'm not going to make a slice of life.

I'll come out with a better description when I know what will happen xD