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The Captive
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Complete, First published Dec 10, 2017
He would gladly welcome death, as a friend whose arrival had been delayed too long. As the one last middle finger pointed to his captors who had not understood that his death would also be their demise. (Flash Fiction written for the Writer's Digest Your Story #83 Competition)
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