Ms. Bartender
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Last published Wed, Jan 22, 2025
"Tell me"
"Tell you what?"
"Don't play with me Rachael. You fucking know what I'm talking about"
"I don't know what your talking about" Rachael said cautiously, hoping that he would realize that she wasn't lying to him, that she really was clueless.
"I'm gonna ask you one more time Rachael and I need you to think about your answer."
Rachael looked around at the three of them with pleading eyes, silently begging her captors to believe her. She got cold stares in return.
"Fucking Tell Me"
Rachael yelped and shrink back at his hard, rough tone. For the first time in her life Rachael was whole heartedly scared shitless. She knew if she didn't pick her words right the consequences would be severe but what would she say she genuinely had no idea what Jordan was talking about. She took a deep breath and shakily told him
"Jordan, I really dont know what your talking about. If I did I would have told you when u first ask. You have to beli-"
"Tsk tsk tsk. Wrong answer"
Rachael screamed as her face met the barrel of his gun.
"Gun meet Rachael, Rachael meet my personal lie detector test"
And with that said he pulled the trigger.
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