Alla of Myth

(This is my first story I've shown to the public and I appreciate criticism) Alla is the Death Goddess of the land of Myth, and as far as being a death god goes, her life is pretty nice and normal. That all changes after a family incedint, and Alla's life and mind goes spiraling down into oblivion as slowly a plan evolves to get her anger out on the world of humans. The only thing to stop her from carrying out her schemes is Merlin and his life long friend Arthur, but Merlin's loyalties are torn as a former relationship becomes blaitintly appearent.