Sky's shadow 2.0
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Ongoing5m
Last published Wed, Mar 7, 2018
About a year ago, I made a story called 'sky's shadow' I had very few ideas and it felt like the characters emotions and the way they acted didn't change one bit which makes me feel upset that it wasn't good enough so, I'll be making the first story all over again to make it better//
Sky /plant/ was taken away at the age of 5 from her village in Eglends and taken to a school that would teach her to use her weird abilities for good use like being a assassin or guard for a kingdom.
Though sky has no true clue what her 'ability' is, there is a darker force that may ruin her chances in leaving the school...or survival
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