My Hero's Journey

This is a fairy tale fantasy take on my life experience dealing with depression and isolation, I wrote it without any outline or plan to where or how I wanted my story to unfold. Simply wrote what came and the visions that came with the journey as I recounted my life experiences. I'm truly proud of this short story and feel it has a great pace and cliff hanging ending. I would really love feedback, notes, comments and any insights. Please feel free to comment below. I'm 30 years old and this is my story of complete mental collapse recently and also complete transformation. It is still a work in progress, any help in grammatical errors and editing in general would be greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy.