One Comment That Changed It All (Jimin x Wattpad Author Reader)
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Last published Sat, Dec 29, 2018
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My phone buzzed as the notification from Wattpad, among others, alerted me of new notifications on my just recently posted book. I smiled as a warmth filled me and my heart at all the users who loved me on this app. Loved reading my stories.
I reached over and grabbed my phone from off my night stand beside my bed, in which I had currently been eaten a cup noodle for dinner, it sitting between my thighs, and brought it in front of me, turning it on, the light of the screen illuminating my face in the dimly lighted room, the screen shining into my (E/C)'s as I looked down at the new notification.
I chuckled at the username, always finding them to be funny in some way, especially if they were BTS related. I brought my thumb down and slid my phone screen over, revealing the lockscreen. I drew my lock and the screen opened to the already open app of Wattpad, it's orange borders surrounding the white screen of my profile.
I tapped on my notifications, scrolling through the already 50+ comments and votes, before clicking on the newest notification from BTS_Jimin_Oppa.
//BTS_Jimin_Oppa
How are you so knowledgeable of Jimin?! This is amazing! Everything is so accurate, so true, so...real! I bet he would really love you, (U/N)ie...you're amazing.\\
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Heya! I really hope you like my story, for I'm putting a lot into it! This is my first BTS story, so please don't judge.
I do not have any ownership over BTS, or anything else that is not mine in this story.
I am going to try and keep up with this one, but I will need all of you to remind me too, haha! And give me ideas! I love to read comments as well! And vote!
Thank you lovelies!~
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--He's a sin she's willing to commit and confess to God to seek forgiveness so that she can sin again freshly... But the moment she sees him an unknown irritation rises in her maybe it's kind of nervousness... Who knows.... --She's an angel who's like an enemy to him who himself is a Devil.. Oh how he wishes to stain her angelic soul with his dark one... But he doesn't know the darkness she's hiding in her heart.... __When can these parallels collide??__ "Baby girl! I know you are enjoying your food but if you don't stop that sound now, I'll be the reason you'll be making those sounds instead of food with my name screamed while the whole plane knows how much you're enjoying me. Better to shut that pretty mouth of yours if you don't want that. Don't want to bend here, right? So.." "Thank you for your kind words mister. I'm enjoying my food and I'll take your advice, but" then I leaned forward and whispered to him "I may castrate you before you do that. You may never get the chance of your enjoyment you are talking about. Be careful with your words and behaviour." *___*___*___*___*___*___* "Why can't you just leave me alone...." "Because I know you need me darling..." "No..I don't need anyone and mostly I would never need you...." he suddenly pulled me to him and started grazing his hands on my waist and came closer to my ear ... then whispered the words which made me shiver ... "say that again my sweet wine.. I'll fuck you right here, on this table, with the blinds open so that everyone can see how much you need me.." This is my first ever story that I'm working on, so forgive me for any kind of mistakes.... ________________________________________________ All rights reserved. This story is published subject to the condition that it shall not be reproduced or retransmitted in whole or in part, in any manner, without the written consent of the copyright holder, and any infringement of this is a violation of copyright law.
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