Punishments Reserved for Stutters

This was a creative narrative essay I had to write for my English Comp. class towards the beginning of the year. I thought I could transfer the story over here because my teacher said really nice things about it, boosting my confidence tremendously. Anyways, here we go!
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Living in a society where criminals are punished by transforming into vile beasts can make any stomach hurl, and that's no exception for Rachel. This fear causes her to make sure her actions are set in place. She makes sure she gives to the community, never break a law, and be the perfect little girl. But, will knowing a dark secret about these creatures change her?