The Black Queen (Being Rewritten!)
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  • Reads 127
  • Votes 19
  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 51m
Complete, First published Dec 18, 2017
In the kingdom of Mordin, a mysterious woman enters the castle for an audience with the king. Just a few minutes later the king lies dead at her feet, his blood staining the cold marble of the throne room. A demon hunter enters the kingdom, tasked with finding out what the demon wants and why she has come. A servant girl serves the new queen, learning that all may not be as it seems, and the queen tries to atone for an ancient sin that has damned her to hell for all eternity.

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