Comatose | Sequel To: Enigma |
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It's been ten years since that deal has been made and a lot has changed. Enmira is no longer the woman she once was and things are only getting worse. Certain tragedies has lead her to become the cold hearted criminal everyone says she is. More lies are beginning to spread and it's only making her life that much harder. No doubt Thorin has heard of what she's done, so how will he see her now? Everyone wants her dead and without his memories... he may wish the same. There's only one person that has the power to save them both but life isn't always fair.
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