The Lake: Book 1

The Lake: Book 1

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Peebles was a small town, nestled between lush green hills to the west and a large lake to the east, known as Eddleston water to the locals. Eddleston water was beautiful, surrounded by vibrate grass on one side and framed by a dense forest on the furthest side. It is unknown what lies beyond the forest however there were tales, past down for as long as the village had existed, that told of a magical realm that existed just out of sight. These stories claimed that Eddleston water was the border where the magical and non magical worlds met and that anyone who dared to cross would be trapped on the other side... forever. (I AM THINKING ABOUT PUBLISHING THIS STORY BUT WANTED TO SEE WHAT PEOPLE THOUGHT OF IT FIRST. ALL CRITICISM WELCOME. AS A THANK YOU TO ANY HELPFUL COMMENTER'S, LEAVE YOUR NAME (IF YOU WOULD LIKE OR I'LL JUST USE YOUR USERNAME) AND IF THE BOOK IS PUBLISHED I WILL PUT YOUR NAME IN THE ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS)
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Writing this for a contest: (prompt 44) In the middle of a storm, a stranger arrives at her cabin, and she offers them shelter. But the storm's forecast said they'll be stuck for much longer than expected. *************** She was a squib, and she lived in the middle of the woods away from society. Her parents were purebloods, but they passed away from Dragon Pox, leaving the girl alone. She was raised away from society because her parents wanted to keep her safe from the wizarding world. Her parents raised her without magic, or if they did use magic, it was when she wasn't around or wasn't paying attention. She was oblivious to magic, because she had never seen it before. So, when a stranger arrives at her cabin in the middle of a wild storm, she was hesitant, because she had never been around anyone but her own parents before. When the forecast came through that the storm made it impossible for everyone to leave their homes, she realized she was stuck with the stranger longer than she anticipated. The stranger had an almost threatening aura around him, and that scared her slightly, but she couldn't help but feel intrigued by him. What she didn't know, was in the wizarding world, there was a special thing called soul mates. This stranger had arrived by accident, but there was reason. He had been trying to get away from the evil of his father, and went in search of his soul mate, but the storm slowed him down, unknowingly bringing him right to his soul mate's front door...

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