The Promise
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I always knew that you and Me weren't a reality. More like a dream that could have never been brought to life. Practically fiction. I wasn't necessarily the only problem.I was rather nieve and gullible.But, You find an easy target, study them, then find ways to make them long for you, until it hurts. You then make them feel special and 'worthy' of your love. Not long after, you drop everything out of the blue, leaving us feeling used. Thinking of the bitter Sweet memories that were almost too good to be true. We eventually build up walls, turning our once fragile hearts In to rock solid stone. All because you couldn't keep a commitment.All because you broke The Promise.
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