The World Inside God's Acre

The World Inside God's Acre

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One Graveyards. People always have mixed feelings about graveyards. Few find it an holy place, few have memories trapped beneath the ground and others find it utterly disturbing or perhaps a rather scary; obviously there are dead people lying all over the place . But some people like me may find it rather a fun place to be. From childhood,I didn't spend a lot of time with my family. You know what a busy family looks like; it's much worse than what it seems. I had a lot of friends to be with all the time but they too insult me in so many ways in the name of friendship. I was always been an introvert and felt really shy to go against those and maybe even to talk to people as well. As a 10 year old, the worst thing that could possibly occur to me is public speeches. This somewhat phobia extended so extreme that I nearly stop talking to any living homo sapiens. I first started talking with dogs ,cats and even birds but that doesn't seemed a very good idea. They ignored me more than the actual people. My surroundings also gave me new names like- insane, crazy, freak along with the names I had before. I stopped talking to them soon as well. Being a 16 year old, I was all alone in this overly loaded world. On the new years eve of 2016 suddenly my neighbor died. I wasn't that bothered or even a bit sad. The feelings I had was long gone. I felt rather empty. Nevertheless I went to the chapel for the funeral; there I met a girl, about my age, about my size as well. She was a lot like me and from that very moment I wasn't alone anymore. That day changed my entire life.
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In a dystopian world, where the strongest prevails, having peace is a luxury. Especially when someone from the past is out to destroy everything we have built up over the past 15 years. And with Christmas approaching, our group get to face ten hellish days. Preview: In his fury, the chains have rubbed his wrists and neck raw, despite me trying to calm him down. He suddenly calms down when the screams in the cell next to us switch to the sound of bones breaking. Now he sits with foam on his lips and his eyes wide, looking that way. After ten minutes, the sounds of the boys in our cell have died down, and we all look at the wall that separates us from the crackling of the breaking bones. And then suddenly all is quiet. After a few silent minutes, our cell door opens slowly. From the ball of light from the ceiling, the little girl in the doorway is illuminated. She is completely covered in blood and doesn't move. Then she opens her eyes and carefully walks towards us. And despite everything, my first impulse is to crawl backwards, away from the unnatural calm radiating from her. ------------- After reading yet another great older brothers/younger sister story, where the family gets reunited after years of separation, the sister keeps the secret that she was abused and assaulted all along, and the brothers conceal their work in the mafia, I decided to give it also a try. The output of my story was initially to turn this around with openness and unconditional support and the torture should happen right in front of their very eyes. Because no story is complete without the (un)necessary bloodshed, action, humour and, of course, a bad guy. And who knows, to throw everything completely upside down, the main character may not survive. I won't write warnings above each chapter, because most of them contain violence, blood, torture, etc. Constructive criticism is welcome. Ow, and English is not my first, second or third language. So if I mess up somewhere, let me know!

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