Both Alone

Both Alone

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Mina was the wife of jameel (policeman) , she was loyal & good housewife but day by day jameel's behavior was getting change and rude to her. They didn't have kids because jameel didn't want to have kids . One day jameel tells his wife everything which she didn't know at all and the same day jameel gets killed .His police fellows does investigation after his death.. What jameel revealed to his wife? Who killed jameel? Did jameel's police fellows succeed in finding out the murderer ?
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In the beginning she was alive, her soul bare for this man, loved him with every fiber of her being. She was willing to give up everything that she had for him and worked hard for the future they both hoped for each other; when he still existed. She loved him but did he ever feel the same way? He was loving, caring, and kind; everything a girl could ever wish for in a man. The words destructive and inhuman would've never crossed her mind to describe her husband; or was she so stupid to see it all from the very beginning? Every day she prayed to the man above that the love and attention she constantly gave him would be enough to change such characteristic; no, flaw. But it wasn't so. Every day was a battle, getting worse and worse; that one day she just snapped. ***STRONG PLOT AND LANGUAGE*** ***UPDATE*** To my great surprise, this story has been getting more reads than I ever thought possible. I reread what I wrote once again and tried not to cringe at the many errors and awful sentence structure I had. So in the spirit of Christmas I will try to edit and perfect this story. There wouldn't be changes in the plot, just hopefully a better way of sharing my thoughts. If it's still crap, then I apologize I'm only human :) ****

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